Sunday, October 16, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday: October 16th

Happy Sunday to all! I'm so glad that it has finally arrived - it means that my son's big marching band trip is finally over, and Mom can relax and tease a few peeps with a few lines from her current WIP.  As promised here are six lines from the first chapter of Saving Micah. Be sure to stop by the rest of the amazing authors on Six Sentence Sunday and we all love lots and lots of comments!  :D  
“Shh, mal-chich.”  A cool hand pressed against his free arm before sliding down to tangle with his fingers.
It sent a familiar surge of pleasure through him.  His world suddenly righted. Mistress is here, everything will be okay. Despite the agony it caused, he tried to open his eyes, needing to see her – to make sure she wasn’t a hallucination from the drugs they’d been forcing down his throat. 
Hope you all enjoyed this week's six and don't forget to stop back next week. I'll be posting six sentences from the next chapter! 

Dakota  

14 comments:

  1. Ohhh, I'd love to know more. Sounds intriguing.

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  2. Wow, great setup. You have me wondering why it's okay that Mistress is there when he's suffered through druggings. Nice six.

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  3. Well, I'll definitely be back. That was a great hook.

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  4. ooooo....intriguing! want to know more.

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  5. Ooh interesting six :D Def more please :D

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  6. Poor guy! I'm hooked and want to know he's okay... Great six!

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  7. Great six... lots of intensity here!
    Amy Durham

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  8. Oh, I can feel his relief with her arrival. Great six!

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  9. Love the emotion in this. Well done!

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  10. So intriguing. Wonder about the drugs and wonder about the "mistress."

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  11. Wow, look at all the comments. I come home from my band trip to find my blog has been busy. It's great to see everyone commenting and realizing that I should've probably given a bit more background info for my six. Poor Micah is in the hospital because he trusted the wrong Domme and the nice nurses drugged him to help with the pain. This six was taken from the scene where he wakes up to find his former Mistress at his bedside.

    Dakota

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