Sunday, October 16, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday: October 16th

Happy Sunday to all! I'm so glad that it has finally arrived - it means that my son's big marching band trip is finally over, and Mom can relax and tease a few peeps with a few lines from her current WIP.  As promised here are six lines from the first chapter of Saving Micah. Be sure to stop by the rest of the amazing authors on Six Sentence Sunday and we all love lots and lots of comments!  :D  
“Shh, mal-chich.”  A cool hand pressed against his free arm before sliding down to tangle with his fingers.
It sent a familiar surge of pleasure through him.  His world suddenly righted. Mistress is here, everything will be okay. Despite the agony it caused, he tried to open his eyes, needing to see her – to make sure she wasn’t a hallucination from the drugs they’d been forcing down his throat. 
Hope you all enjoyed this week's six and don't forget to stop back next week. I'll be posting six sentences from the next chapter! 

Dakota  
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14 comments:

  1. UnknownOctober 16, 2011 at 4:36 AM

    Ohhh, I'd love to know more. Sounds intriguing.

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  2. sueOctober 16, 2011 at 8:01 AM

    Yes more please

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  3. Siobhan MuirOctober 16, 2011 at 9:23 AM

    Wow, great setup. You have me wondering why it's okay that Mistress is there when he's suffered through druggings. Nice six.

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  4. Carrie Ann RyanOctober 16, 2011 at 11:13 AM

    Oh, I agree - more please!

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  5. UnknownOctober 16, 2011 at 11:42 AM

    Well, I'll definitely be back. That was a great hook.

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  6. LizOctober 16, 2011 at 12:51 PM

    ooooo....intriguing! want to know more.

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  7. Lex ValentineOctober 16, 2011 at 1:00 PM

    Poor dude! Who would drug him?

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  8. Kharisma RhayneOctober 16, 2011 at 1:09 PM

    Ooh interesting six :D Def more please :D

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  9. Chrystalla ThomaOctober 16, 2011 at 1:26 PM

    Poor guy! I'm hooked and want to know he's okay... Great six!

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  10. Kelly's MomOctober 16, 2011 at 1:33 PM

    Great six... lots of intensity here!
    Amy Durham

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  11. Jessica E. SubjectOctober 16, 2011 at 4:16 PM

    Oh, I can feel his relief with her arrival. Great six!

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  12. Vivien DeanOctober 16, 2011 at 5:28 PM

    Love the emotion in this. Well done!

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  13. Cara BristolOctober 16, 2011 at 6:26 PM

    So intriguing. Wonder about the drugs and wonder about the "mistress."

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  14. Dakota TraceOctober 17, 2011 at 2:01 PM

    Wow, look at all the comments. I come home from my band trip to find my blog has been busy. It's great to see everyone commenting and realizing that I should've probably given a bit more background info for my six. Poor Micah is in the hospital because he trusted the wrong Domme and the nice nurses drugged him to help with the pain. This six was taken from the scene where he wakes up to find his former Mistress at his bedside.

    Dakota

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