Sunday, April 22, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday: April 22nd

Once again it's Sunday and it's time for the SSS madness to start. As always each and every author appreciates those of you who stop by our sites and comment.  So be sure to drop back HERE - I know the other authors will greatly appreciate it.  With  that being said, I once more have six sentences from my m/m short, Kaholo's Seduction.  This six takes place after Toby and Koholo are interrupted on the beach for dinner.  This bit of dialogue is from Koholo's p.o.v. as he's reminiscing about their first kiss. Enjoy.


In his pants, his cock stirred at the memory – of how sweet but tentative Toby’s lips had felt against his as he finally gave into his natural desire for another man – namely Kaholo.  Never mind the fact that he’d had to ply the man with plenty of Coronas to get past his inhibitions.  He’d soothed his conscious by reminding himself he’d managed to keep his hands off Toby’s amazing body while they’d kissed.  Not that it had stopped Toby from rubbing every inch of his against mine while we kissed each other senseless.  He’d almost spilled inside his pants like an untried youth.  The only thing which had stopped him was the arrival of his mother; her distaste for his lifestyle had not only ruined the mood - but had sent Toby scurrying back up the beach towards his much more modest home. 

5 comments:

  1. A hot six! That is, until his mother came along.

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  2. Great snippet, love the twist.

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  3. Yep, I can see how mom might spoil the moment!

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  4. Clarify the "his" on "his mother." It's not clear to me just whose mother arrived.

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  5. Oh BUMMER they got interrupted, he had some nice memories going on there! Great six!

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