Sunday, February 19, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday: Feb 19th


Hey peeps, welcome back for another edition of Six Sentence Sunday. I'm glad you could stop by.  As always, I appreciate you taking time out of your busy Sunday schedule to spend time with me. And of course your comments are always welcome, but don't forget to stop by HERE and check out all the SSS fun! With that being said, I've got six sentences from my serial story, Exploring Her Submission: Nisey,  which will be coming out on Amazon soon from Red Lipstick Journals.  In this part, the characters are Master Yangchi, Nisey, and her Dom Caelan who are trying to get past one of Nisey's hurdles - her fear of suspension. Enjoy!


“Fall back against Master Caelan.” Master Yangchi’s order was spoken so forcefully, Nisey responded without thought. Standing in the middle of the large airy playroom with her back to Caelan, she allowed her body to fall back into his arms. The familiar warm strength of him surrounding her, causing her nipples to harden with awareness even as security washed over her. 
When they entered the room, this was the last thing she expected. What the hell does a trust building exercise have to do with my fear of suspension - I trust Caelan -  it’s the idea of nothing supporting me but ropes that scares me shitless.

12 comments:

  1. Like the story and want more
    but really hate the 2 words have to type to comment - I have crap eyes

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  2. I love that this is bondage, but you've focused on the psychology of the characters. Sex is so much more interesting to read when we get to know the emotions behind the acts, imo.

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  3. This is great - definitely leaves me wanting more!

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  4. Great internal monologue - her fear's very plain, but so is her trust of him. Good work.

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  5. Not my cup of teat, but well written.

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  6. That extra t was NOT supposed to be there!

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  7. Sooner or later, she'll realize she doesn't trust him enough if she's still afraid. Great job!

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  8. Interesting psychology coming out in this snippet. Nice six!

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  9. Very interesting! Wonder where this story is going... :)

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