Sunday, November 6, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday: Nov 5th


Once again this week's SSS comes from my current WIP, Saving Micah.  As promised, here's six sentences, once again from chapter two. (Sorry about it not being three - been buried in finals, but I hope you'll  forgive me.)  It's from Jude's (the other hero in this menage tale) POV. He's been doing some digging to find out what happened to Micah the night of his attack. Enjoy and don't forget to check out the rest of the SSS Authors here!  (And don't be shy, we all love to hear from you folks - so comment away :D)

The feel of Olivia’s hand on his bare shoulder drew his attention away from the computer screen.
“Mistress Brigit finally emailed us.” He looked up at her. Even with him sitting and her standing, his head was nearly level with hers. “She did some checking around about the night that Micah was last seen. It seems Micah did leave the club with a woman."

13 comments:

  1. Thanks for visiting my blog. Get working on chapter three! :)

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  2. Hope they figure out what happened to their friend!

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  3. Jessica,

    That's the plans for today. I've got a deadline for mid Dec for the first draft, so I'll be writing fast and furious, now that finals are done and I have a week off.

    Dakota

    Eleri,

    I think they will - and maybe eventually they will tell the poor author - namely me, so I can finish this story.

    Dakota

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  4. "It seems Micah did leave the club with a woman." Oooooh, nice set up. Can't wait for more, Dakota. :)

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  5. Well done, Dakota. Lots of intrigue you've introduced with these six.

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  6. So much mystery here. I want to read more! :)

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  7. Hey Dakota! Love the six! Hope you have a fantastic Sunday!

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  8. Hmmm, tall guy, huh? My favorite. Can't wait to find out what Micah's up to. Good six.

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  9. Great ending hook and very intriguing. Nicely done six :)

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  10. At least they have an answer now. Thanks for sharing!

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  11. Intriguing! Wonder what else they'll uncover...

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  12. oh.... who did Micah leave with? And who the heck is Mistress Brigit. I'm totally intrigued. Great six!

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