Okay so I'm back for more. This week's snippet is from my current project with Evelise Archer - Yesterday's Secrets. This scene happens after a rather wicked voyeuristic scene between Keegan and Marik as they watch Luis and his lover, Andre go at it on the beach. In fact this is the four paragraphs that follow last week's tease. Enjoy as the conversation takes unexpected turn, much to Keegan's dismay.
Dakota
Snippet:
“See, what I said?” Luis nudged his lover. “The bien parecido doesn’t realize his attraction.”“Indeed.” Andre tugged his man closer. “Perhaps we shall change his mind during his stay? Perhaps his lover will wish to join as well. It would be a first for us, but you are very persuasive, mon amour, when comes to the physical act of love.”Heat filled Keegan’s cheeks. Mon dieu. He couldn’t believe it. It sounded as if they were expecting him to have a ménage-a-tois. Or a foursome with Marik. The idea made his cock hard but at the same time had his head spinning. He hadn’t ever kissed a guy let alone thought of the semantics of being intimate with more than one.“Hush…” Luis placed his fingers across Andre’s lips. “You’re going to scare him off.” He turned a magmatic smile toward Keegan. “There is no pressure, Keegan. Andre and I have a very open relationship and love including others in our pleasure. We thought you might be interested- after this afternoon. We’d even welcome your amante. He looked very dangerous when he took control of your orgasm. I swear Andre came unglued the moment he demanded you come for him.”“Shit.” Keegan's ears started to burn.
Now don't forget to stop by the rest of the wonderful writers on the blog hop. I assure you there is plenty of yumminess to go around.
1. Raya Ezelle 4. Joelle Casteel 7. Evelise Archer
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Any ideas when you and Evelise may finish this? :D Have a publisher in mind? I so want to buy this!
ReplyDeleteIt's a work in progress. I wish I could say for sure. But we hope to submit it for publication this spring - then it will be a the mercies of the publisher. :)
DeleteDakota
I'd love to watch them all come unglued together. :D
ReplyDelete~Charley
Charley,
ReplyDeleteThat'may just happen. Keegan will definitely be exploring before he makes his final decision.
Dakota
oh yum! I'm on the edge of my seat for the next snippet! When the book comes out, its gonna be on my kindle.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Raya. Hopefully it will be soon. Especially if I can my muse into line.
DeleteDakota
Why am I just a tad bit worried, oh writing partner?!
ReplyDeleteEvelise
What? *gives innocent look* I wouldn't do anything "untoward" to our characters would I? *taps chin* Now Livvy on the other hand? I wouldn't trust her as far as I could throw her...hehehehe.
DeleteDakota
And believe me *nodding head furiously* I don't trust her...LOL
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