Sunday, September 4, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday : Sept 4th

All of us have a bit of inner Domme or Dom in us.  With this week's six sentences, we'll see the heroine getting tough with her lover - but only in the best of ways...lol.  Without further ado, here's Xaviera and Nate from Blind Need.
He trembled as if a lash, rather than her hand had touched him. His control was almost gone, making his tone gruff. “Yeah?”
“Get your ass back in here and finish what you started.” Her finger curled around one of the loops on his shorts. “And don’t forget the damned condoms, because I will kill someone if you stop again.” 

8 comments:

  1. Finally, I get to comment! YAY! I loved the last comment about the condoms and killing someone! Great six! :)

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  2. Great 6
    (for the record...man do I hate condoms...lol)

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  3. Siobhan,
    Yeah somehow when I scheduled it, I changed the bubble to no comments. Talk about a D'oh moment.

    And the last sentence was put for a bit of comedy relief. I always want a bit of humor in my writing.

    Dakota

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  4. Kharisma,
    I couldn't agree with you more,condoms should be considered evil...but a necessary evil. Absolutely nothing sexy about putting one on or having it break.

    In this story, I just submitted it to Decadent's 1 Night Stand series...and the good girl in me insisted that I have them. Usually my characters know each other well enough that they forgo them and use another form.

    Dakota

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  5. Lex,

    Very true. That's probably why I love writing paranormal stories where there are no STD's or the heroine can't get pregnant unless she's his mate.

    Dakota

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  6. Carrie,
    Thanks for commenting and glad I could get a chuckle out of you.
    Dakota

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