Saturday, November 2, 2013

#MySexySaturday {23}: Healing Hark

Whether it's seven words, seven sentences or even seven paragraphs, it's all about the heat. It can be sweet or it can be down right naughty - everyone has their own opinion of what is sexy.  For this weeks seven, I've picked seven paragraphs out of Healing Hark, my Nanowrimo submission. Enjoy my sexy seven and be sure to stop by the other peeps blogs. Gotta keep hopping!  


        Despite being in a long-term relationship 
        with his Master and lover, Diachi Rai, 
        CEO Bryan Sterling is feeling restless, 
        and it all has to do with his Master’s 
        new friend, Harkalone “Hark” Akula. 
        Ever since the Native American switch 
        entered his and Master Rai’s home, 
        Bryan’s been distracted and out of sorts. 
        But it’s not just because he finds the man 
        attractive, or that his Master was paying 
        Bryan any less attention with their guest 
        there. It’s his unreasonable fear that Hark 
        is here for more than just a place to stay. 
        No, he just can’t get over the feeling that 
        Hark has an ulterior motive: to make a play 
        for Bryan’s Master. When the fear 
        becomes reality, Bryan panics. 

        Diachi is a man of many secrets, and Hark 
        happens to be one of his darkest. As his 
        first submissive, Hark was partially respon-
        sible for molding Diachi into the Dom he’s 
        become. But when he found himself unable 
        to give Hark what he needed, Diachi had 
        uncollared him, letting the man he loved go, 
        rather than share him. Now Hark is back, 
        scarred and darker than Diachi could ever 
        remember him being. While in love with 
        Bryan, Diachi still can’t find the strength 
        to turn Hark away. But it sets in motion a 
        series of events which he is unprepared for, 
        when Hark requests becoming the third 
        member in his and Bryan’s relationship. 

Seven Sexy Paragraphs
Set up:  Bryan, Diachi's submissive is asking if he did something wrong, and his Master is more than willing to convince him that he hasn't. 

The words were soft but Diachi heard them, and the underlying doubt in them. His beautiful submissive, the man he’d been in love with for the past five years had slipped once again. Hurt in the past, Bryan still at times harbored concerns about his place in Diachi’s life. And our upcoming talk is only going to cause more issues. Why the hell didn’t I tell Olivia no when she asked me to give Hark a home.
“Did I say I was unhappy with you, Bryan?”
The blond head shook against his knee.
“The few times we’ve had problems, did I let either of us hide from them?”
Bryan shook his head again. “No, Master.”
He buried his fingers in Bryan’s curls, pulling his sub’s gaze up to met his. “That’s correct. I’m honest with you, even when being quiet would avoid issues. I won’t ever lie to you. Yes, I was distracted. We’ll talk about the reason later. But first I need my hana fix.” He released Bryan and pointed to the center of the bed. “Up.”

Rising smoothly, Bryan settled in the middle of the bed, his blue eyes down cast, but his exquisite form displayed in the rumpled bedding. The submission radiating off his submissive was more than just a standard position the man was holding when he knelt with his legs spread, palms up on his thighs and his head turned to the left and gaze lowered. The familiar thrill Diachi got from it, never failed to surprise him. There was just something about experiencing Bryan’s submission that made him feel like he was the king of his world. Of course seeing the rigid stalk of flesh standing proud between Bryan’s thighs only added to the feeling. The idea that he still affected his man this way after all these years sent blood pounding to his own cock. 

©Dakota Trace All rights reserved. This is a work of fiction. All names, characters, locations, and incidents are products of the author’s imagination, or have been used fictionally. Any resemblance to actual persons living or dead, locales, or events is entirely coincidental. No portion of this work may be transmitted or reproduced in any form, or by any means, without permission in writing from the author.


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    1. Thank you ma'am. Its rough - just written last night but I do love my smexy men...especially when one is super dominant. This will be a first for me - writing an all male bdsm menage book. Lets hope I don't end up with any disembodied body parts. LOL


  2. I am waiting patiently for this one...not! Hurry please..

    1. Shhh....don't spook the muse, Evelise. Livvy is being temperamental today.

  3. Ummm, MMM menage :) That will definitely be going to the top of my TBR list. If you have to, bribe Livvy with chocolate to get her to working better.

    1. I may just end up doing that June. If I can get her to sit down for more than 3 seconds. She's in a tither about something. *sigh* probably me for telling her that the story she wants me to write has to wait.

  4. I like the way you set up the conflict up front--but then let Diachii's lust for his sub show his own vulnerability as well. Good job, Dakota!

    1. Thanks Jina. Even my Doms have to have some amount of vulnerability. They are human just the like the rest of us. I honestly think it smooths over some off their rougher edges and makes them seem easier to relate to. Thanks for stopping by.

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    1. Thanks for stopping by, Lynn. I love working on different pairings and it will be a nice change from Dommes and their submissives.


  6. I like how tenderly Diachi cares for the emotions of Bryan. Plus, the passion between them is super hot.