Whether it's seven words, seven sentences or even seven paragraphs, it's all about the heat. It can be sweet or it can be down right naughty - everyone has their own opinion of what is sexy. For this weeks seven, I've picked seven paragraphs out of Healing Hark, my Nanowrimo submission. Enjoy my sexy seven and be sure to stop by the other peeps blogs. Gotta keep hopping!
Seven Sexy Paragraphs
Set up: Bryan, Diachi's submissive is asking if he did something wrong, and his Master is more than willing to convince him that he hasn't.
The words were soft but Diachi heard them, and the underlying doubt in them. His beautiful submissive, the man he’d been in love with for the past five years had slipped once again. Hurt in the past, Bryan still at times harbored concerns about his place in Diachi’s life. And our upcoming talk is only going to cause more issues. Why the hell didn’t I tell Olivia no when she asked me to give Hark a home.
“Did I say I was unhappy with you, Bryan?”
The blond head shook against his knee.
“The few times we’ve had problems, did I let either of us hide from them?”
Bryan shook his head again. “No, Master.”
He buried his fingers in Bryan’s curls, pulling his sub’s gaze up to met his. “That’s correct. I’m honest with you, even when being quiet would avoid issues. I won’t ever lie to you. Yes, I was distracted. We’ll talk about the reason later. But first I need my hana fix.” He released Bryan and pointed to the center of the bed. “Up.”
Rising smoothly, Bryan settled in the middle of the bed, his blue eyes down cast, but his exquisite form displayed in the rumpled bedding. The submission radiating off his submissive was more than just a standard position the man was holding when he knelt with his legs spread, palms up on his thighs and his head turned to the left and gaze lowered. The familiar thrill Diachi got from it, never failed to surprise him. There was just something about experiencing Bryan’s submission that made him feel like he was the king of his world. Of course seeing the rigid stalk of flesh standing proud between Bryan’s thighs only added to the feeling. The idea that he still affected his man this way after all these years sent blood pounding to his own cock.
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Mmmmm...super hot.
ReplyDeleteThank you ma'am. Its rough - just written last night but I do love my smexy men...especially when one is super dominant. This will be a first for me - writing an all male bdsm menage book. Lets hope I don't end up with any disembodied body parts. LOL
DeleteDakota
I am waiting patiently for this one...not! Hurry please..
ReplyDeleteEvelise
Shhh....don't spook the muse, Evelise. Livvy is being temperamental today.
DeleteDakota
Ummm, MMM menage :) That will definitely be going to the top of my TBR list. If you have to, bribe Livvy with chocolate to get her to working better.
ReplyDeleteI may just end up doing that June. If I can get her to sit down for more than 3 seconds. She's in a tither about something. *sigh* probably me for telling her that the story she wants me to write has to wait.
DeleteDakota
I like the way you set up the conflict up front--but then let Diachii's lust for his sub show his own vulnerability as well. Good job, Dakota!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jina. Even my Doms have to have some amount of vulnerability. They are human just the like the rest of us. I honestly think it smooths over some off their rougher edges and makes them seem easier to relate to. Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteDakota
Very hot and interesting.
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by, Lynn. I love working on different pairings and it will be a nice change from Dommes and their submissives.
DeleteDakota
I like how tenderly Diachi cares for the emotions of Bryan. Plus, the passion between them is super hot.
ReplyDeleteVery sensual and sexy! :)
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