Saturday, October 5, 2013

#MySexySaturday {19}: Her Naughty Boy (Adult Excerpt)

This week I'm switching gears and giving you another seven paragraphs from my current WIP, Her Naughty Boy. (which means the snippet is totally unedited - so forgive any typos or grammatical errors!)

When it comes to being sexy, I can't think of anything sexier than a woman knowing what she wants and going after it, even if her lover is being evasive. Especially when she's in control.  Join Mistress Lily as she uses the shower to ferret out Kyle's deepest sexual fantasies.  Enjoy and don't forget to stop by the rest of the peeps on the hop.  

Tentative Blurb: 
  Best friends since early childhood, Lily 
  Banner and Kyle Austin had done every-
  thing together but have sex. From the 
  school room to the their morning radio 
  show at KKRC Kyle has always had 
  Lily's back, which is why her refusal to 
  see him anything other than a friend irks 
  him. He wants the inner Domme he keeps
  catching glimpses of. But he also under-
  stands what she sees when she looks at 
  him, but with Christmas around the corner, 
  he's not above showing her exactly how 
  naughty he can be - especially if it ends up 
  with him right where he wants to be: on 
  his knees and at her mercy.

  Lily Banner holds a dark secret from Kyle - 
  or so she thinks. Late at night, when the 
  need gets to her, she dons her leather, visits 
  the Velvet Fist and becomes Mistress Banner. 
  Just before Christmas, Kyle pushes too hard, 
  sending her to the club in effort to find a 
  naughty submissive to punish. She never 
  expects her problem to show up, wrapped in 
  tight leather shorts and harness.  When he 
  manages to piss off another Dom, it's up to her 
  to save him. Pissed at Kyle's lack of common 
  sense, she defuses the situation and orders him  
  to leave. When he refuses, she tells him the 
  price of staying is putting himself in her hands.
  She never expects him to agree. Now it's up to
  her to show her naughty boy the error of his 
  ways. Either way it's going to be a Christmas
  neither will forget. 

Seven Sexy Paragraphs:

“Ignoring me isn't going to end this any sooner.” She tugged on the curls just below his navel. He inhaled just as sharply.
“I'm not ignoring you, Mistress. I'm just not sure what you want to hear.”
Sympathy filled her expression, but was gone a second later. “The truth. That's what I want. To fulfill your desires, I need to know them. I may be able to read you at times, but I'm not a mind reader any more than the next Domme.”
Pleasure followed her soapy fingers as she cupped him again, using the bubbles to create the most exciting friction he'd ever felt. It wasn't like when he soaped up and jerked off. Her touch was different. Not quite as rough as his, but more confident than any other woman had ever been. She didn't shy away from his dick like it was a weapon to be used against her. No, his Mistress was handling it as if it belonged to her instead of him.
“I never asked you to be, Mistress.” He bucked up into her touch, hissing as her thumb strummed over the sensitive point just below the head of his cock. How the hell did she know?
“Hmmm....” She pressed harder against the spot. “I bet you'd go crazy if I had you pierced here. A lovely little hoop that I could hang these little weights I have off of. It would weight you down, but from what I've been told it's a very pleasurable sensation. Is that part of what you want?”

His blood rushed hard through his veins, every part of his body reacting to her words. Even if the actual piercing hurt, he wanted to experience what she spoke of. “Maybe...” 

©Dakota Trace All rights reserved. This is a work of fiction. All names, characters, locations, and incidents are products of the author’s imagination, or have been used fictionally. Any resemblance to actual persons living or dead, locales, or events is entirely coincidental. No portion of this work may be transmitted or reproduced in any form, or by any means, without permission in writing from the author.


  1. Oh my! Very hot - and the editor in me didn't see any problems, a very well crafted scene. Eager for more :)

    1. Thanks Adriana. I try really hard, and my betas usually catch my errors.

  2. Ha! I bet he would like that. :) Great sexy snippet!

    1. *smiles* maybe. We'll just have to wait and see if she manages to coax the truth out of him. Willful man that he is. Thanks for stopping by Danita.

  3. Oh, she definitely got a reaction there. Love it! :)

    1. I believe so. But then again what man wouldn't react to such....handling. thanks for stopping by Jessica..

  4. Dayum! That was smokin' hot! Definitely a wicked game week excerpt ;-)

    1. Thanks Morticia. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

  5. Now I'm going to have find out if he got the piercing or not!

    1. Is there anything sexier on a guy? I don't know what it is about those little studs on a man that makes a woman want to take a bite of out him....but it's there. Thanks for stopping by KC.


  6. Mmm, so love the bubbles. Great scene.

    1. Bubbles are definitely fun, and Lily has no issue with playing with them. Thanks for taking the time to comment MJ!


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    1. Thanks Christina! I was hoping others would think it was sexy as well.