This week I'm switching gears and giving you another seven paragraphs from my current WIP, Her Naughty Boy. (which means the snippet is totally unedited - so forgive any typos or grammatical errors!)
When it comes to being sexy, I can't think of anything sexier than a woman knowing what she wants and going after it, even if her lover is being evasive. Especially when she's in control. Join Mistress Lily as she uses the shower to ferret out Kyle's deepest sexual fantasies. Enjoy and don't forget to stop by the rest of the peeps on the hop.
Seven Sexy Paragraphs:
“Ignoring
me isn't going to end this any sooner.” She tugged on the curls just below his
navel. He inhaled just as sharply.
“I'm
not ignoring you, Mistress. I'm just not sure what you want to hear.”
Sympathy
filled her expression, but was gone a second later. “The truth. That's what I
want. To fulfill your desires, I need to know them. I may be able to read you
at times, but I'm not a mind reader any more than the next Domme.”
Pleasure
followed her soapy fingers as she cupped him again, using the bubbles to create
the most exciting friction he'd ever felt. It wasn't like when he soaped up and
jerked off. Her touch was different. Not quite as rough as his, but more
confident than any other woman had ever been. She didn't shy away from his dick
like it was a weapon to be used against her. No, his Mistress was handling it
as if it belonged to her instead of him.
“I
never asked you to be, Mistress.” He bucked up into her touch, hissing as her
thumb strummed over the sensitive point just below the head of his cock. How the hell did she know?
“Hmmm....”
She pressed harder against the spot. “I bet you'd go crazy if I had you pierced
here. A lovely little hoop that I could hang these little weights I have off
of. It would weight you down, but from what I've been told it's a very
pleasurable sensation. Is that part of what you want?”
His
blood rushed hard through his veins, every part of his body reacting to her
words. Even if the actual piercing hurt, he wanted to experience what she spoke
of. “Maybe...”
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Oh my! Very hot - and the editor in me didn't see any problems, a very well crafted scene. Eager for more :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Adriana. I try really hard, and my betas usually catch my errors.
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Ha! I bet he would like that. :) Great sexy snippet!
ReplyDelete*smiles* maybe. We'll just have to wait and see if she manages to coax the truth out of him. Willful man that he is. Thanks for stopping by Danita.
DeleteOh, she definitely got a reaction there. Love it! :)
ReplyDeleteI believe so. But then again what man wouldn't react to such....handling. thanks for stopping by Jessica..
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Dayum! That was smokin' hot! Definitely a wicked game week excerpt ;-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Morticia. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteDakota
Now I'm going to have find out if he got the piercing or not!
ReplyDeleteIs there anything sexier on a guy? I don't know what it is about those little studs on a man that makes a woman want to take a bite of out him....but it's there. Thanks for stopping by KC.
DeleteDakota
Mmm, so love the bubbles. Great scene.
ReplyDeleteBubbles are definitely fun, and Lily has no issue with playing with them. Thanks for taking the time to comment MJ!
DeleteDakota
Very sexy snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks Christina! I was hoping others would think it was sexy as well.
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