Saturday, August 31, 2013

#MySexySaturday {14}: Wyk's Surrender (FemDom)

My, how the week has flown. Saturday again already? Well that means that it's time once again for some #MySexySaturday. This week I'm going to bring you seven paragraphs from a book, I've been doing edits this past week: Wyk's Surrender (a FemDom story for Decadent Publishing's 1NS series) It only seemed fitting that I use that MSS for MySexySaturday. In this snippet, Mistress V has asked Wyk if he's sure he wants to stay.  And of course, like every good Domme, she is going to discuss limits, which can be very sexy if not downright erotic. 

I still don't have any cover art yet, but check out the blurb below and yummy picture I posted to go along with it. This is how I picture my heroine.  Mistress V is no thin stick woman. She's a BBW and proud of it. Enjoy!  Oh don't forget to stop by the rest of the peeps on the hop. Now off to check out the rest of the blogs.
                                                   


  Driven to the point of desperation by what
  they want, both Venus and Wyk turn to 
  Madame Evangeline in hopes of forgetting, 
  never suspecting the lovely Madame knows
  best…

  Venus Spinazzola-Navarro, better known 
  as Mistress “V” has been lusting after her 
  boss for longer than she can remember. 
  She wants him at her mercy, begging for 
  her touch, but when an off-handed 
  comment dashes her hopes, she turns to 
  the same match-making service her 
  cousin used. She’s going to drive her sexy 
  boss out of her dreams if it’s the last 
  thing she does.

  Chadwyk “Wyk” Havas has lived up his 
  father’s expectations as a “proud black 
  man’ for nearly his entire life, despite what 
  he wants. But when his sexy curvaceous 
  executive assistant has pushed him to his 
  limits, he gives in.  But before he’ll go 
  crawling to Venus on his hands and knees, 
  he needs to find out if he can submit to a 
  woman. He just never dreams the Domme 
  that Madame Eve sets him up with is actually 
  the woman he’s wanted all along.
Seven Sexy Paragraphs
(Also a tidbit on the set up of this snippet. Wyk is blindfolded and kneeling naked in front Venus who is sitting on settee)

“Yes, Mistress.” His response wasn’t the meekest she’d ever heard, but he seemed comfortable enough for a man in his position.

“Good. Before we start, do you have a safeword?” She swung her leg over the edge of settee.

“Ah...no. Do I need one?” He tipped his head.

“Yes. Never scene without one, slave. Until you can decide upon a personal one, why don’t we go with the word ‘red’? It’s a classic stop word that any Domme worth her salt will recognize and halt without question.”

He nodded. “Yes, Mistress.”

Shifting her weight forward, she studied him. “Limits. What boundaries will you not cross? If I told you I wanted to bind you, flog you, have you eat my pussy before I shove an anal plug up your tight ass, what would you say?” She studied him.

Wyk’s tongue peeked out to touch the top of his lip, before darting back in. His nostrils flared. “Where do I sign up, Mistress?” His chest expanded and between his thighs his cock filled until it lay thick with a slight curve against his stomach. She focused on his words to resist the urge to move to his side. She so wanted to cup the straining length.



©Dakota Trace All rights reserved. This is a work of fiction. All names, characters, locations, and incidents are products of the author’s imagination, or have been used fictionally. Any resemblance to actual persons living or dead, locales, or events is entirely coincidental. No portion of this work may be transmitted or reproduced in any form, or by any means, without permission in writing from the author.

11 comments:

  1. Love it! Shows the "musts" of the BDSM world, his willingness to please, and her internal battle to restrain herself. Wonderful! :)

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    1. I hope so. There is so much ritual in the bdsm world and trying to make some of the more mundane areas sexy...can be a challenge.

      Dakota

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  2. Holy smokes, that's hot. So happy to see a dominant woman for a change!

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    1. Oh, yeah. Venus is definitely a dominant woman. And sooo much fun to write. :D Thanks for stopping by Taryn.

      Dakota

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  3. Where do I sign up...great line!

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    1. Got to love Wyk's snarky humor...even when he's in the submissive role.
      Dakota. Thanks for commenting Naomi.

      Dakota

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  4. Well done, Dakota. I especially like the internet conflict going on with our heroine. Very hot and makes you want to read more.

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    1. Thanks Jina. I try to keep the reader interested. But I'll be the first to admit with characters like Venus and Wyk it wasn't hard. Thanks for stopping by.

      Dakota

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  5. How to erotically tame the right man. ~smiles~

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    1. LOL. Too true. Thanks for taking the time to comment, Savanna.

      Dakota

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  6. Smoking! Love his innocent honesty..."do I need one?"

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