Saturday, September 21, 2013

#MySexySaturday {17}: Healing Hark

Once again it's time for some smexy lines for #MySexySaturday.  As of late I've been teasing you all with my FemDom stories, but this week I figured I'd do something a little bit different and bring you some yummy m/m snippet from my current WIP in progress.  For those of you who are familiar with my Doms of Chicago series, these characters aren't strangers. Master Rai and his sub, Bryan made their first appearance in the Nisey's Awakening and then later in the series, we're introduced to a silent but deadly Native American switch, Hark.  So for those of you familiar with the Doms of Chicago, pull up a chair and enjoy a sneak peek of what happens when the past collides with the present - with unexpected results. Because remember whether it's seven words, seven sentences or even seven paragraphs, it's all about the heat. It can be sweet or it can be down right naughty - everyone has their own opinion of what is sexy.  

Anyway enjoy my sexy seven and be sure to stop by the other peeps blogs. Gotta keep hopping!  


        Despite being in a long-term relationship 
        with his Master and lover, Diachi Rai, 
        CEO Bryan Sterling is feeling restless, 
        and it all has to do with his Master’s 
        new friend, Harkalone “Hark” Akula. 
        Ever since the Native American switch 
        entered his and Master Rai’s home, 
        Bryan’s been distracted and out of sorts. 
        But it’s not just because he finds the man 
        attractive, or that his Master was paying 
        Bryan any less attention with their guest 
        there. It’s his unreasonable fear that Hark 
        is here for more than just a place to stay. 
        No, he just can’t get over the feeling that 
        Hark has an ulterior motive: to make a play 
        for Bryan’s Master. When the fear 
        becomes reality, Bryan panics. 

        Diachi is a man of many secrets, and Hark 
        happens to be one of his darkest. As his 
        first submissive, Hark was partially respon-
        sible for molding Diachi into the Dom he’s 
        become. But when he found himself unable 
        to give Hark what he needed, Diachi had 
        uncollared him, letting the man he loved go, 
        rather than share him. Now Hark is back, 
        scarred and darker than Diachi could ever 
        remember him being. While in love with 
        Bryan, Diachi still can’t find the strength 
        to turn Hark away. But it sets in motion a 
        series of events which he is unprepared for, 
        when Hark requests becoming the third 
        member in his and Bryan’s relationship. 

Seven Sexy Paragraphs

“Please, Master!”
The desperate plea echoed through the main room drew Hark out of his thoughts. From his position he could see the blond man manacled to the pillory. His strong back, bare and glistening had several red stripes already as the man twisted sensually against his bonds. Instead of trying to get away, the man was trying to get closer to the kiss of the whip. In his pants, his cock stirred at the sight. He couldn’t decide if it was the because he wanted to be the one administering the lashing the man was begging for or the fact it'd been over two years since he'd felt the lash against his own skin. His reprieve from his lusts was over. His body once again craved the illusive pleasure he experienced in the past. He hadn’t felt anything remotely resembling desire since the Rotthaus’s deaths.
Shifting a bit, he stepped further back into the shadows, blending into them as if second nature. His leather pants wouldn't hide his semi-erect cock and the last thing he wanted was for one of the un-collared subs to see it and offer themselves to him as several had when he'd first come into the club. He’d promised Zhenya he’d try, but found himself unable to accept what they offered. Instead he found himself taking baby steps to see if he was ready to move on. The woman who’d offered herself had been tempting but it took more than lust to stir him into engaging in a scene. He needed more than physical desire - he needed the connection he'd found with only two men and one woman in his entire lifetime. Now with two of them dead, and third unable to handle his needs he found himself once again looking for the trust, the acceptance he struggled to live without.
Watching as the man’s Dom, dressed in all black drew his arm back, Hark’s sixth sense tingled. The man with his shoulder length hair gathered into a tight braid, reminded him of a ghost from his past. The hair rose on the back of his neck. The fluid motions of the man's body seemed almost dream-like as he effortless flicked the single-tail, dancing it along the skin of his submissive. His weary soul recognized the man without even seeing his face. It can't be. Not now after all I've gone through. Mother Earth wouldn't be that cruel.
Then need to confirm or deny the possibility of it being his former Master, he kept to the shadows and skirted the edge of the gathering crowd, not that anyone was paying attention to the nearly six and half feet of Native American when such a scene was going on. All eyes were focused on the man being whipped and if it was who he thought it was, his former Master had only grown in his prowess with the single-tail since they parted ways. Finally in a position to get a glimpse of the man without being seen, he sucked in a deep breath as both pain and euphoria hit him simultaneously.
It was him. Danchi Rai. The man who un-collared him over ten years ago.
His cock which had been semi-hard just watching the whipping turned to stone in his pants. His body swayed forward, the familiar draw of his first master potent as it had been the first time he'd spotted the slim Asian man across a smoky bar outside of Tucson.

©Dakota Trace All rights reserved. This is a work of fiction. All names, characters, locations, and incidents are products of the author’s imagination, or have been used fictionally. Any resemblance to actual persons living or dead, locales, or events is entirely coincidental. No portion of this work may be transmitted or reproduced in any form, or by any means, without permission in writing from the author.


  1. First let me say the cover is HOT! damn, can't wait to read this.

    1. Thanks Evelise. I love the way the cover came out for it. It was a challenge to make it but very suiting. Almost as hot as the story is shaping up to be.


  2. Very nice, Dakota. I feel as if I'm there. Thanks for sharing!

    1. Thanks Lynn,this book - while it will be sexy, is going to be a harder book for me write. Not only is it a m/m/m bdsm book, but I'm also going to put my characters through hell before they get their happy ending. And of course two of the three men are characters that are like close old friends. They appeared in the very first book in this series and have been appearances in nearly every book since. Thanks for stopping by.


  3. Hi, Dakota,

    Love the build-up to the reveal at the end of the snippet--also liked the idea of hinting at the mystery of why he's reluctant to participate. Takes your story up a notch.

    1. I sure hope so. Thanks Jina. I try to add a bit of mystery into each of my books - or at least not reveal everything at once.


  4. Wow! That's all I can say about your writing. Hot and intense. Plus, you handle the emotions so well. :)

    1. Thanks Jessica. I'm glad you think so. I love Hark, and Master Rai and Bryan are close to my heart so, I think it will end up being a roll coaster ride but well worth it.


  5. Looks like Mother Earth is playing matchmaker. ~smiles~

    1. Yep, I'd have to say just like our god, she has a wicked sense of humor and no matter how Hark protests, she will have her way...just to watch him squirm. Thanks for stopping by Savanna

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    1. Thanks for commenting Christina. I love writing sizzle - I figure it will make up for the hell I'm going to put Hark through.